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It bothered me throughout the review that Mr. Barthelme drew so few literary comparisons. If he had they would doubtless have been to my discredit, but I would have liked them there, anyway. Has he read any long novels? He only mentions five books, four of them short. It is absurd to chide the author of a long novel for a lack of interest in economy. If economy interested me I would have written a short book. In fact I find economy a fucking bore, whether it be literary, sexual, or monetary. It bespeaks the tight-ass, and while it may be a virtue in homeowners and a word beloved of pedagogues, but it’s hardly the mistress for a novelist. Tolstoy didn’t give a fig for economy. Neither did Dostoevsky, Proust, Balzac, Cervantes, Dickens, Fielding, George Eliot, Hardy, Melville. On the whole I would have been more sympathetic to Mr. Barthelme’s criticism of my narration if he had quoted at least one passage in which it was really unclear whose judgment the reader was getting. He might have, but he didn’t. 9.A word about serviceable prose, and high and low emphasis. Poets and short-story writers flinch their way through long novels because they contain, of necessity, so many colorless, ordinary sentences. One writes things like, “He shaved,” so often that one flinches from it oneself and the next time the matter comes up, one writes, “He had disposed of his beard.” Mr. Barthelme is annoyed with me for going on so boringly about the hair-combings and dress-buyings of ordinary life. I’m sorry. I think novels take their life from texture and detail. There are many low-emphasis scenes in Moving On. If the lives I’m interested in rendering don’t interest Mr. Barthelme that’s my bad luck, but those lives do interest me and he has not suggested an alternative method for rendering them. Like him, I am indifferent to structure, but I find texture absorbing. To risk trying to render the boredoms and niggling repetitions and small shifts of feeling that make up the emotional lives of more or less ordinary people is to risk being boring, but I still think it’s an interesting thing to try. THE charge of dullness is of course undebatable. No author in his right mind expects every reader to be as interested in what he was writing about as he is. I was interested in marriage. Mr. Barthelme is more interested in rodeo. The best rodeo novel I know is called No Flowers For a Clown. I think it’s by Stanley Elkins. If he knows any good marriage novels I wish he’d put me on to them. 10.He says Sonny Shanks is the only man in the book who is dominant in his sexual relationships. No one seems to have noticed a couple named the Hortons. I thought Flap Horton did fairly well, without trampling Emma. Dominance too seems to me to be a matter of shading and emphasis. Unequivocal dominance generally does involve some trampling, doesn’t it? 11.Sex. I wasn’t too pleased with the sex in the book, either. What can one do? The New Pornography has long since sucked all the effect out of physical description, and Black Humour has by now pretty well exhausted the comic approach. The only strategy I could think of was to try to do sex through approaches and aftermaths, in both of which, it seems to me, the goodness or badness of the sexual relationship makes itself felt. Maybe it didn’t work. 12.”Patsy herself is not particularly interesting. She seems to be a normal, healthy, bored, wealthy, married young woman of about average intelligence.” Well, here again Mr. Barthelme’s interest diverges from mine. There’s them as likes rodeo and violence and the Berthoud Pa’ss, and then there’s them as likes normal, healthy, bored young women. Bored women are God’s gift to novelists about His only gift, I might add. 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